To “s” or not to “s”: Common Statistical Terms, their Abbreviations, and how to Pluralize Them

Ever get confused when using statistical terms? You’re not alone. In writing for the social sciences in particular, the worlds of mathematics and grammar collide. Academic authors not only have to run statistical tests, but discuss the results in a clear and cohesive way—and since you can lose marks or have a paper rejected from a journal for poor use of English, getting these terms grammatically correct is key. Below are a few common statistical abbreviations, and how they should appear in singular versus plural form.

 

Written-out Form Abbreviation/Symbol
Singular Plural Singular Plural
Cohen’s d Cohen’s ds d ds
degree of freedom degrees of freedom df dfs
F statistic or F value F statistics or F values F Fs
mean means M Ms
sample size (subsample) sample sizes (subsample) n ns
sample size (full sample) sample sizes (full sample) N Ns
p value p values p ps
r value r values r rs
R2 value R2 values R2 R2s
standard deviation standard deviations SD SDs
standard error standard errors SE SEs
t value t values t ts
z score z scores z zs
Cronbach’s alpha Cronbach’s alphas Cronbach’s α Cronbach’s αs
beta betas β βs
chi-square chi-squares χ2 χ2s
delta deltas Δ Δs

Source: http://blog.apastyle.org/apastyle/statistics/

 

Although the above information is based on APA preferences, for some plural abbreviated forms many publishers and institutions would prefer that you write, for example, “Cronbach’s α values” rather than “Cronbach’s αs,” as the latter version could lead to confusion. If you’re not sure which to use, that’s definitely something we can help with.

When deciding between using the singular or plural form of a statistical abbreviation, it’s important to refer to the syntax of your sentence (again, we can help make sure your plurals are perfect!). When using plural abbreviated forms, add a lowercase “s” to the end of the abbreviation, but don’t add an apostrophe before or after the “s” (it’s not “Cronbach’s α’s,” for example) and don’t italicize or capitalize the “s” either—just a simple “s” will do.

Understanding how and when to correctly use statistical terms in your paper, thesis, or dissertation can be headache-inducing, so a professional academic editing service can be invaluable. At Stickler, we have over a decade of experience editing statistical analyses, and we understand the conventions expected by journals and research institutions. Contact us today and let us help you sort your ps from your SEs!

 

 

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Postgraduate Study got you Down? Try these Tips

A great deal of our proofreading and copy editing work at Stickler comes from master’s and PhD students. In fact, theses and dissertations are some of our favorite jobs, because we can see all the dedication and passion that have gone into them and we love helping edge that hard work towards the finish line. However, with hard work often comes a great deal of stress, anxiety, and other mental health problems, and if these aren’t managed effectively it can seriously undermine your health, not to mention the end result of your dedicated study. Here are some ideas for managing stress and related issues.

Have a Good Support Structure

Surrounding yourself with friends and family is a great way to help you blow off steam and put things in perspective. Isolating yourself is one of the worst things you can do and only fosters anxiety and depression during tough times. It might seem like a tall order, but carving out time in your schedule to go to lunch with a friend, visit family members, have dinner with your significant other—or even just have a 10-minute video chat with someone who helps you stay positive—can make a huge difference.

Don’t Forget to Take Care of Yourself

Stress, although a psychological problem, is a self-feeding phenomenon and can affect your physical body more than you realize. However, this means stress and related issues can also be managed, at least in part, through physical care. Taking care of yourself by eating right, getting enough exercise, and making sleep a priority can help you feel more relaxed and ready to tackle the next stage of your research or writing.

Celebrate Successes, No Matter How Small

As a PhD or master’s student it’s easy to focus only on setbacks, especially if you’re stuck on a chapter or not quite achieving the research results you want. To counter this, remember to celebrate the successes in your life—no matter how small. Keeping a gratitude journal is one way to focus on the positive things, whether these are study-related or not.

Remind Yourself of Your Long-Term Goals

Writing your thesis or dissertation can be a grueling process. It’s easy to lose sight of your long-term goals and get stuck in the dread of everyday challenges. Remind yourself of your long-term goals and the reason you want to obtain your postgraduate degree in the first place. Whether it’s a dream job, a research goal, or even just a personal achievement, keeping sight of the light at the end of the tunnel can remind you of why all the hard work now will be worth it later.

Don’t Forget About Your Life Outside of School

While it’s good to be passionate about your work, it’s also important to maintain hobbies and interests that aren’t related to your thesis or dissertation, and to remind you that there is more to life than your degree. This will also enable you to take a break and get refreshed when your studies become stressful.

Don’t Be Afraid to Seek Help

If you sense your feelings are too much to handle on your own, or even just that you might benefit from some outside perspective, don’t be afraid to seek professional help. Many graduate schools offer counseling and therapy services for students, and there are now several websites, such as www.betterhelp.com, that offer counseling online (this can be a great way to access help quickly and easily). Talking things through with a professional can give you the boost and the personal tools you need to continue with your studies in a healthy way.

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10 Writing Tips from Famous Writers

Being a writer, whether you’re an academic, a business professional, or a novelist, is hard work. Below are 10 tips from writers who have achieved a certain level of fame and success. Although a lot of the advice comes from fiction writers, we hope they’ll inspire our academic clients as well, whether that means helping you to hunker down at your desk and write or getting you out of a bout of writer’s block.

 

  1. Be Disciplined 

“All through my career I’ve written 1,000 words a day—even if I’ve got a hangover. You’ve got to discipline yourself if you’re professional. There’s no other way.”

– J.G. Ballard

Unless you’re the kind of person who thrives under pressure, deadlines can be the bane of your life! But instead of stressing out, use deadlines to create a writing schedule to motivate you. If you find yourself unable to write consistently or if you find the prospect of meeting one overarching goal (e.g., “FINISH THE PAPER”) daunting, try setting small milestones for yourself. Taking it a page at a time, for example, can help you avoid feeling overwhelmed, especially if you’re working on a long or complex piece such as a thesis or dissertation.

 

  1. Write What You Would Want to Read

“If there’s a book that you want to read, but it hasn’t been written yet, then you must write it.”

– Toni Morrison

When you go to write something, take a moment to step back and look at your work from the perspective of the reader. Does this paper make a truly valuable contribution to the field, and is it something that you would want to spend time reading yourself? When in doubt, always write based on what you would want to read. Chances are if you enjoy reading your writing, others will too.

 

  1. Keep a Notebook Handy 

“Always carry a notebook […] The short-term memory only retains information for three minutes; unless it is committed to paper you can lose an idea forever.”

– Will Self

It’s important to be prepared when inspiration strikes. Keeping a notebook on you is a great way to jot down your thoughts or interesting facts you come across that can be useful in developing your research. When you’re stuck in a rut, you can always look at your notebook for new and interesting ideas to get you writing again.

 

  1. Read As Much As You Can

“Read, read, read. Read everything […] and see how they do it. Just like a carpenter who works as an apprentice and studies the master. Read! You’ll absorb it. Then write. If it’s good, you’ll find out. If it’s not, throw it out of the window.”

– William Faulkner

To master the craft of writing, you need to first master the craft of reading. Imagine going to a restaurant where the chef has never eaten the food, or listening to a singer who doesn’t enjoy music. Read everything you can—including on topics that are outside of your field of study. By reading, you can learn from other writers and absorb their techniques.

 

  1. Get Organized

“I don’t need to know everything, I just need to know where to find it.”

– Albert Einstein

If you’re constantly trying to find the right place in your preliminary research or locate your most recent data, try getting organized. Even if you’re not the type to use color-coded folders and neatly positioned Post-Its, just keeping reference information, arguments, quotes, statistical workings, and so on in the form of well-ordered notes with clear headings can be immensely helpful.

 

  1. Edit, Edit, Edit

“The first draft of everything is s**t.”

– Ernest Hemingway

After you’ve created your draft, it’s important to go back and edit it. It can help to give yourself some time between writing and editing—that way, when you come back to your work you’re fresh and able to see issues you might have missed before. Of course, we also recommend using a professional copy editing service after you self-edit to ensure that your work is fully ready for publication/submission to help you polish your language, and ensure that everything is consistent, the references are in the correct style, and the work flows.

 

  1. To Be a Writer, You Have to Write

“Planning to write is not writing. Outlining… researching… talking to people about what you’re doing, none of that is writing. Writing is writing.”

– E.L. Doctorow

While it’s important to plan and outline, spending too much time on those things can turn into procrastination. Trust that you’ve done enough research and planning to start formulating your arguments and thoughts on paper. Sit down, take a deep breath, and get started.

 

  1. Remember it’s Okay to Make Mistakes

“We learn from failure, not from success!”

–  Bram Stoker

Never be afraid of making mistakes—even the most recognized authors in your field will have faced criticism at one time or another, and remember, the only way to improve is to make mistakes and learn from them. If your findings are questioned, or your paper rejected from your target journal, remember not to take it personally. Try to take a step back, look at the feedback you’re given, and use it to your advantage to develop your work.

 

  1. Write Clearly

“A good style must first be clear.”

– Aristotle

This point is especially pertinent for academic writing. Even simple sentences can convey complex ideas, while verbose, overly wordy text can confuse the reader and detract from an otherwise solid argument. Again, a professional copy editing service can be of immense help in trimming unnecessary or repetitive words and phrases to make sure the key ideas are clear.

 

  1.  Write Through Your Problems

“The time to begin writing an article is when you have finished it to your satisfaction. By that time you begin to clearly and logically perceive what it is you really want to say.”

– Mark Twain

Writer’s block is a real problem even for academics. With all the research and information at your disposal, putting your thoughts on paper in a way that makes sense can be a challenge. If you’re ever having trouble articulating your central proposition or hypothesis, try writing through it—put pen to paper (or fingers to keys) and just get going. By the time you’ve finished writing the first draft, you should start to see the logic you need take shape.

 

 

A Tale of Two Dictionaries: Some Common Differences between US and UK English

There are nearly 350 million native English speakers in the world. The American version of English is spoken by around 70 percent of those native speakers, while the other 30 percent speak UK English. Even more people, 1.5 billion, speak either US or UK English non-natively. To an untrained eye UK English and US English may seem very similar. While there are plenty of similarities, there are also significant differences to be aware of. Whether you’re taking a trip across the pond or trying to make sure you’re staying in line with style guidelines, here are a few of the key differences between the two.

Vocabulary

A big difference between British and American English is the vocabulary used. These differences in vocabulary can be found in simple, commonplace words like pants (called trousers in UK English) and can cause some confusion in everyday conversations. There are hundreds of words that mean something different depending on who you’re talking to or what country you’re in. Below are a few of the most common vocabulary differences between UK and US English.

UK US
holiday vacation
lift elevator
secondary school high school
jumper sweater
flat apartment

 

While these words can get confusing, most Americans and Brits can understand each other with the help of context clues. Here is a more comprehensive list of vocabulary differences.

Spelling

If you’re an academic submitting to journals, you’re no doubt aware that while some words used in both UK and US English have similar meanings, the spelling can differ. Understanding the proper spelling for each country can help make sure you don’t get pulled up on this point. The main spelling differences in the two types of English include the following:

–er/re

The suffix –er in American English is often reversed in UK English. For example, center in US English becomes centre in UK English.

–nse/nce

Words that end with –nse in US English often take an –nce ending when spelled in UK English. For example, defense in the US would be defence in the UK, and license in the former becomes licence in the latter.

–ize/ise

Many people mistakenly think that –ize is the US spelling and –ise UK (e.g., organize vs. organise; legalize vs. legalise); however, the Oxford English Dictionary (widely considered to be the leading resource for British English) actually prefers –ize. In other words, in UK English either –ise or –ize is acceptable (though it’s vital to be consistent throughout your document), but in the US it’s always –ize.

–or/our

While American English ends many words with –or, British English adds an extra u into the mix. This makes words like color and humor in the US colour and humour in the UK.

Auxiliary Verbs

Another major difference between UK and US English pertains to auxiliary verbs, also known as helping verbs. These are used to add information, such as time and voice, to the main verb. One of the major auxiliary verbs that you will see in UK English, but rarely in US English, is the verb shall. In the UK, people use shall to express something they are going to do in the future, such as “I shall go home in 5 minutes.” While in the US shall is seen as a very formal way of speaking and is almost never used in conversation. Americans would be more likely to say something like, “I will go home in 5 minutes.”

Similarly, to express a lack of obligation in British English you might say “You needn’t write that essay,” where need and not are contracted to form the auxiliary verb needn’t. In American English, you would be more likely to contract do and not together to form don’t—“You don’t need to write that essay.”

Understanding the subtle differences between UK and US English can help to ensure you don’t fall foul of style preferences of your school, journal, or publisher. Our founder, Jinny, was born and raised in the UK but has lived in the US for many years, so we can definitely help to make sure you get it right!

Studying

4 Simple Study Techniques to Try This Semester

Whether you’re studying for an exam or trying to get a paper written, finding the focus you need can be difficult. Creating a personalized study plan is one of the most effective ways to stay focused and finish the task at hand. Below are four simple study techniques to try this semester. They are designed to help you create a study strategy that works for you.

1. Eliminate Distractions

In our interconnected world, one of the best ways to ensure you get zero studying done is to surround yourself with distractions. Distractions can be anything from open tabs on your internet browser, to a vibrating phone, or a messy room. Even when you think you’re not being distracted, there is almost always the potential for distraction lurking around the corner. In order to truly get work done you don’t just need to avoid distractions, you need to eliminate them completely.

 

Use focus apps—There are too many focus apps out there to list, but finding an app that works with your browser and operating system can help stop you from going to websites that aren’t conducive to studying. SelfControl (for Mac) and Cold Turkey (for PC) are some great focus apps that are easy to use and can help you eliminate the distractions of the internet altogether.

 

Disconnect from the internet when writing—Even with focus apps blocking certain websites, you still have access to the possibilities of the internet. While search engines can be useful for looking things up when doing research, they can easily turn into an endless rabbit hole of irrelevant internet searches. Try unplugging your router while you write the first draft of your paper—in other words, worry about researching facts and citing sources later, just try and focus on the writing.

 

Put your phone in another room—Physically removing your phone from arm’s reach can do wonders for your studying productivity. This technique eliminates the possibility of mindlessly picking up your phone every time it lights up. You might be surprised at the amount of time you save by not looking at your phone every few minutes.

2. Create a Designated Space for Studying

If you’re currently studying on your couch or bed, the physical space around you could be hindering your ability to study efficiently. Much like you have dedicated spaces for certain activities in your life—a bed for sleeping, a table for eating, a couch for entertaining—it’s just as important that you have a dedicated space for studying. Carve out a corner of your room where you can place a simple desk and a comfortable chair. Make sure the space is well lit and add personal touches like paintings or house plants. Once you sit down in your dedicated study space your brain will associate it with that specific activity, making your study time more efficient.

3. Meditate to Clear Your Mind

Studies have shown that meditation can help you concentrate for longer periods of time. A large part of studying is staying focused on the task at hand. If you find your mind wandering away while you’re trying to work, meditating can help you concentrate and absorb the material that you’re reading. Meditation is also a great tool for clearing your mind of any anxieties, worries, or stress that may be hindering your ability to study.

4. Take Better Notes

Your study strategy is only as good as the notes you take. If your notes are currently an incomprehensible scribbled mess, it may be time to rethink the way your approach. Below are a few tips on how to take better notes that can change the way you study.

 

Get organized—To make your notes easier to read when you’re studying, try color coding them by topic. Using highlighters, different colored pens, or sticky notes can make the result more fun and effective.

 

Cornell Method—There are several different proven methods for effectively taking notes, including the Cornell Method. This involves separating your notes into two columns and asking yourself a series of questions after you’ve taken them—we thoroughly recommend checking out the above link to find out more. You can also try the Mapping Method and use Mind Maps to help organize your thoughts.  

 

Creating a study strategy is an important tool for excelling in your courses and using your time efficiently. So experiment with eliminating distractions, carving out a space for yourself, meditating, or revamping your note-taking approach to figure out what works best for you.

Fear-based procrastination

“The Thief of Time”: Fear-based Procrastination and How to Fight It

Have you ever tried to ignore an important task, irrationally hoping that it will go away on its own? You might have imagined that an assignment is bigger or smaller than it really is. Many people substitute an essential task with something else, such as cleaning their workspace or home. Others will create detailed plans but not do the actual work, or stick to only one part of the project and ignore everything else.

All of these are examples of procrastination, and all are seductive ways of putting off what we need to do today.

Why do we procrastinate, even when the results can be so negative?

For most people, fear is the cause of procrastination; we procrastinate to relieve fear and anxiety. This might be fear that:

  • Our work will not turn out well due to our own high standards. (Did you know that some people handicap themselves when they feel not up to a task, so as to have an excuse for their failure?)
  • If we start working harder and then succeed, expectations will increase to an unsustainable level.
  • The task is just too big to accomplish.

In a similar vein, we might delay starting work because:

  • It makes us feel more in control, perhaps as a form of rebellion against authority figures or teachers.
  • We want others to come “rescue” and help us.

Here’s where the tough love comes in.

Whatever emotions drive your procrastination, it’s important to realize that procrastination is a choice. For example, when you substitute one task for another, you are actually choosing to procrastinate, even though it feels very impulsive. Most people make time for the things that they really love to do, and have appointments that they would never miss or cancel. When you look at procrastination as a choice, it’s easier to see that you can change the way you manage your time.

How can you overcome procrastination?

Most people ultimately overcome procrastination when their fear of missing a deadline becomes greater than their fear of doing a bad job. They throw something together and hope for the best. However, this is a very hard path that can lead to regret.

We here at Stickler got together to find some slightly (we feel) more effective ways to change your procrastination habit.

  1. Take care of yourself physically.

There aren’t a lot of things that can’t be cured with a walk in the fresh air, moderate exercise, a healthy diet, and enough sleep. Studies have shown that people who take walks see marked improvement in their focus and attention span. And those who are well-rested have more willpower and are more likely to make the tough choices that combat procrastination.

  1. Reduce negative self-talk.

Most procrastinators hate the fact that they do it on a regular basis. They often think that there is something wrong with them. They might tell themselves that they’re stupid and don’t deserve to be in the position they’re in, which is known as imposter syndrome. Negativity pushes you deeper into procrastination because you need a relief for your anxiety.

You would never bully a friend who procrastinates, so why should you do the same to yourself? Be nice to yourself most of all.

  1. Create a productivity log.

Rather than creating a to-do list, you might consider creating a “done” list and write down things that you’ve accomplished that day. You’ll see what you’re doing well and what you could do better. It’s much more heartening to see completed tasks, rather than a list of things that you didn’t get around to doing. It’s one way to create accountability to yourself.

  1. Break it down.

In a similar vein, it can be useful to break down that one “mammoth” task (e.g., “write my PhD dissertation 😐 ”) into smaller, digestible chunks (e.g. “draft outline,” “write introduction,” “send literature review for proofreading,” and so on). Regardless of whether you favor a to-do list or a productivity log, it will end up with a lot more items on it!

  1. Get an accountability buddy.

Many PhD candidates’ biggest regret is not joining a thesis support group. We’ve talked before about asking others for help when it comes to your writing, and we’ll say it again. Accountability buddies can help motivate you, keep you on track, and give you a trusted vent for your emotions. You don’t even have to find someone to work with face-to-face—try online forums for students in your field.

In the end, it’s always important to keep your goal in mind. Instead of thinking about your goal in terms of finishing your academic paper or your master’s thesis, you might want to think about the place of this big project in your life. How will it benefit you to do well on it? How will you feel once you finish? Giving a project personal meaning is the key to consistent motivation in the face of difficult tasks.

H&M spelling fail

8 Very Public Writing Mistakes and What You Can Learn from Them

When you edit other people’s writing for a living, you start to see grammar and spelling mistakes everywhere you go. If it’s on Buzzfeed it’s funny, but if a mistake pops up in your thesis, essay, or website, that’s another thing.

Here are some common mistakes we love to hate!

  1. Using apostrophes to show possession vs. plural -s

apostrphe vs plural

(photo credit: EmmaB/GuardianWitness)

 

One use of the apostrophe is to show possession. For a singular noun, add an apostrophe plus the letter s (e.g. “The dog’s coat”). For plural nouns, you can just add an apostrophe (e.g. “The dogs’ coats”).

Plural nouns are usually formed just by adding -s or -es (e.g., “legs,” “churches”), or by changing the final -y to -ies (as in “piggy” to “piggies”). Ninety-nine percent of the time, no apostrophe is needed, provided you are not indicating possession. You can read about the exceptions here.

In the image above, it should be “ATMs” and “Retail, Food & Drinks.”

 

  1. Of vs. off

off vs of

(photo credit: Via Buzzfeed)

 

“Of” is a preposition that relates two words. Usually, it shows possession or a relationship, or what material something is made from. For example, when you say, “Bill is a friend of Mary’s,” you’re using “of” to describe the relationship between Bill and Mary. When you say, “That cup is made of porcelain,” you’re describing materials.

In the photo above, the tagger meant to talk about the connection between “you” and “everything good.”

“Off” is usually used as an adverb, but sometimes it acts as a preposition. In any case, it most often creates the idea of separation or moving away. For example, “The plane took off at 4:00 PM.”

 

  1. Every day vs. everyday

 

Grammar fail

(Photo credit: 8002575540/GuardianWitness)

 

It’s amazing how much difference a space makes.

“Every day” means the same as “each day.” For this sign, “Amazing Value Every Day” would be correct.

If used as one word, “everyday” is an adjective that means “daily or commonplace.” On the above sign, you could retain “everyday” but still make the grammar correct by switching the order to “Amazing Everyday Value.” Note: “Everyday” can also be used as a noun, as in, “The challenges of the everyday can be exciting.”

 

  1. Strange quotation marks

Quotation mark fail

(Photo credit: 1emsmom/CNN)

 

Let’s just forget about the comma placement (and lack of space thereafter) in the above, which is also debatable. There are several ways to use quotation marks, whether you’re including someone else’s words in your own work, or talking about the title of a poem, or denoting speech.

The above example is none of those, and the only use that’s left is to convey sarcasm or a euphemism. You’ll see people do this when they’re talking and they create quotation marks in the air with their fingers.

We think the makers of the sign actually meant that baseball is for kids, rather than so-called kids.

 

  1. You’re vs. your

Grammar Fail

(photo credit: Huffington Post)

 

This is one we at Stickler see every day.

“You’re” stands for “you are” (e.g., “you’re going to love this”). “Your” shows possession (as in, “mind your manners”).

In the image above, it should be “You’re the best teacher ever.” While the gift is very cute, we hope these students weren’t trying to honor their English teacher!

 

  1. They’re vs. their

Grammar Fail

 

Like the you’re vs. your problem, the confusion between “their” and “they’re” has a similar solution.

“They’re” stands for “they are” (e.g. “they’re heading out to sea”) while “their” is used to show possession (e.g. “they forgot their boat”). So, what the sign means to say is “They won’t even know they’re learning.”

We won’t get into the irony of this being a display for educational software…

 

  1. Commas and direct address

Comma fail

 

(Photo credit: Lifebuzz)

You might not know what the grammatical term is for the above issue, but you definitely know that there is a comma missing between “eat” and “people.”

Whenever a sentence talks to the reader it’s called direct address, and it requires a comma. Another example would be, “Andrew, I said that we needed four pairs of socks, not four socks.” The first comma makes it clear that Andrew is not actually part of the sentence.

 

  1. Not running a spell check

H&M spelling fail

(Photo credit: Capital Bay)

 

Individuals aren’t the only ones who are prone to grammar and spelling mistakes. Clothing giant H&M found itself the butt of many jokes when it debuted this t-shirt in 2015 (it should be “genius”). It’s just one more example of why checking all of your writing for grammar and spelling mistakes is so important.

 

Not sure if you’re breaking one of these rules in your writing? Get in touch!

 

 

 

 

 

 

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10 Editing Tasks all Academics Should Complete before Submitting their Work

You’ve done the hard work—researching, putting down your thoughts, and formatting your essay or paper. Now, it’s time to edit.

“But I thought you guys were in charge of editing?” you might ask. That is of course true, but your paper will be much stronger if you edit your content yourself, to the best of your ability, before passing it on to us. You might not catch every mistake, but even thinking “This doesn’t seem right to me” about a sentence shows that you know more than you think.

Here are 10 major editing tasks you should aim to complete before submitting your work to a professional copy editor.

  1. Create an outline of the paragraphs you actually have.

Many teachers will tell you to create an outline before you start writing. However, formulating an outline of what you have actually written makes sense, too. You’ll see what you’ve already got, what’s missing, and what would be the optimal order for your paragraphs and sections.

  1. Read just for flow and logic.

Here’s one way to think about it: if a sentence raises questions, the next sentence—or, at the very latest, the next section—should answer those questions. Otherwise, you’re sure to confuse your reader.

  1. Find all clichés and re-write them.

Your initial drafts might have a lot of clichés because you weren’t writing for quality; however, clichéd writing is bloated and, worse, unexciting. Writers at The Washington Post have compiled an excellent list of clichés to eliminate in your own writing.

  1. Read your paper out loud.

This is a real favorite of writers everywhere. When you read aloud, you proceed more slowly and can hear the rhythm of your writing. As a very simple rule of thumb, if you have run out of breath before get to the end of a sentence, that sentence may be too long. If a sentence seems too complex, your reader will probably get lost reading it.

Bonus: Although we recommend looking for grammar errors once your content and logic is sound, you will also catch a lot of grammatical errors through reading aloud.

Once you have gotten your content the way you like it, you can look for grammatical errors. The following big errors can sink a paper.

  1. Check for too much passive voice.

Some people think passive voice (where the subject is acted upon—there’s passive voice right there) is never good. We think it’s needed in some contexts, but make sure active voice is used wherever possible, as it makes your paper more dynamic and keeps wordiness to a minimum.

  1. Ensure your antecedents are clear.

Antecedents are the words that pronouns refer to. For example, consider the following:

“This finding is significant, but it does not explain the anomaly cited above.”

“it” is the pronoun that refers to the “finding.” Now imagine a similar sentence:

“This finding does not explain the anomaly cited above; however, it is significant.”

Does “it” here refer to the finding or the anomoly? Sense suggests the former is most likely, but this is unclear from a grammatical perspective. At the very least, the reader might have to go over the sentence a second time to ensure they have understood you, which is far from ideal.

It’s easy to confuse your reader with “unanchored” pronouns in this manner, so make sure your antecedents and pronouns can be easily matched.

  1. Check for shifting verb tenses.

Be sure that your verb tenses do not shift unnecessarily. For example,

“These authors suggested a new theorem. They find that…

would read much better as

“These authors suggested a new theorem. They found that…”

or

“These authors suggest a new theorem. They find that…”

  1. Make sure you apply parallelism.

Parallelism, or parallel construction, involves using similar clause or phrase structures in order to create balanced sentences. For example, take the following, poorly constructed, sentence:

“We conducted our study during May–June 2016, and this involved disseminating a questionnaire, to conduct interviews, and completed observations.”

In the list of things that the authors did, “disseminating,” “to conduct,” and “completed” are all grammatically different. The sentence would be improved if it were as follows:

“We conducted our study during May–June 2016. This involved disseminating a questionnaire, conducting interviews, and completing observations.”

Here, “disseminating,” “conducting,” and “completing” are grammatically consistent.

  1. Fix comma splices and run-on sentences.

Occasionally, instead of using a period to end one sentence and begin another, some people use a comma instead. These comma splices are easily fixed by using a period to separate sentences or by using an appropriate conjunction, such as “and” or “but.” For example,

“We conducted our study in Israel, our sample involved an equal number of male and female participants.”

is better as

“We conducted our study in Israel, and our sample involved an equal number of male and female participants.”

or,

“We conducted our study in Israel. Our sample involved an equal number of male and female participants.”

A run-on sentence is similar, with no punctuation defining the end of sentences. The sentence appears to “run away” without end.

“We conducted our study in Israel our sample involved an equal number of male and female participants.”

There are two full clauses or sentences in the above example. Thus, run-on sentences can be fixed in a similar way to comma splice errors.

  1. Always, always run a spell check!

We know how tedious this can be in a lengthy paper full of citations, but it is extremely important as a final step. Running a spell check will enable you to locate the most egregious errors and avoid embarrassing typos. However, you’ll have to look for subtler mistakes (two vs. too, for example) by hand—or have us do it for you!

Climbing

Overcoming Writer’s Block for your Dissertation/Thesis: A Short Guide for Academics and Students Alike

Writing a dissertation or thesis is a mammoth challenge. Many students encounter writer’s block at some point during the writing process, which can induce frustration or even straight-out panic.

Writer’s block at this level has less to do with a lack of ability and more to do with perfectionism and procrastination. Overcoming writer’s block is definitely possible, especially once you understand what might be holding you back.

A great resource for those struggling with writer’s block is (surprise!) Understanding Writing Blocks by Keith Hjortshoj. In particular, Hjortshoj addresses the feeling of inadequacy that can cause an otherwise capable academic to freeze in his or her tracks:

“Writing blocks are most common among advanced undergraduates, graduate students, scholars, and other professional writers who are not supposed to need help with writing and do not need the kinds of writing instruction offered in the typical composition class.”

In other words, many students might feel ashamed that they’re having problems with writing and productivity. Sound familiar?

How about these situations?

  • You don’t feel “ready” or “prepared enough” to write. You might not feel like you’ve read enough. For those in the sciences, you may not have ever had to write long papers, unlike your colleagues in the humanities.
  • You might also feel a discrepancy between the standards you hold yourself to and your actual performance. Confronting this difference can be daunting, since it’s difficult to own up to one’s shortcomings.
  • You’re finding it difficult to adapt to the style of writing or conventions within your field.
  • You’ve had negative past writing experiences. Perhaps you’ve had teachers or peer editors who have been overly critical or have given you hurtful feedback.

Once you’ve figured out what feelings might be causing the block, what should you do to? Try one or two of these remedies.

  1. Set goals and track yourself

Cutting overwhelming tasks down to size is an effective way to gain momentum. It sounds simple, but simple solutions aren’t necessarily easy to execute.

Consider dividing your writing into different types of tasks. Completing a chapter involves filling it with content, making your argument clear, fitting it into the outline of your entire paper, creating transitions, checking your citations and data, and editing. That’s too much for many people to do all at once. Instead, tell yourself, “For this chapter, I’ll get the basic content outline down; no editing, no argumentation” and move on from there.

  1. Schedule time purely for writing

We’ve talked about creating a writing ritual before. It’s important to shield yourself from distractions, even from checking every single citation and figure as you go. Make time to just write, since ideas are useless if they reside only in your brain. If you’ve never done this before, don’t try to sit for two hours straight off the bat. Try for 30 minutes and build up from there.

  1. When you see a gap in your research or become stuck, seek help

Many students with perfectionistic tendencies panic when they get stuck or find that their research is lacking. They might be reluctant to ask for help, but honestly, that’s what a good thesis or doctoral advisor is for. The sooner you reach out, the sooner you’ll resolve the problem. Additionally, don’t forget to ask your peers for help or advice. You might find that others are in the same boat and be able to identify ways to help each other.

  1. Look at similar dissertations or papers

Speaking of looking to others for help, you might want to look at existing dissertations in your field. You’ll see where you’re doing well and what you could improve. In many cases, seeing finished products can boost your confidence by showing you that you aren’t as behind as you think. This tip is especially handy if you haven’t yet started and are looking to write your proposal, since you’ll see what’s manageable and what’s unwieldy in terms of scope.

  1. Fight perfectionism by letting go

Perfectionism can paralyze you. You’re worried you won’t meet some standard and won’t begin out of fear. Or you might delay yourself with constant rewrites and re-reading, which can create a sense of hopelessness. However, realize that your thesis committee will question your arguments no matter how “perfect” your work is. You could improve your paper for a lifetime and still get a ton of questions and critiques. When you feel that a paper is 95% good enough, and your content, data, and arguments are solid, it’s time to let it go.

Are you writing your dissertation or thesis? Don’t let a fear of mistakes hold you back from getting it done. We LOVE editing undergrad and graduate work—the lengthier the better!

Doggy-dog world

“It’s a Doggy-Dog World”: 7 Misused Phrases We See All the Time in Writing

When you hear an expression and then learn what it means, it’s tempting to use it later on in your writing, especially if you’re trying to create a more natural tone. However, writing what you hear can lead to all sorts of newly minted expressions—such as “doggy-dog world,” instead of the correct “dog-eat-dog world” (a term that Cambridge Dictionary defines as being “used to describe a situation in which people will do anything to be successful, even if what they do harms other people”).

For people who speak and write English as a second language, learning how to use idioms and phrases correctly can be infuriating. It’s easier when you are a word-origin nerd like many of the team members at Stickler, but even people who grew up as native English speakers have a hard time using these expressions in their writing. Take a look at these seven mistakes and keep an eye out for them in your own work!

1. Incorrect: To give someone free reign
Correct: To give someone free rein

People use this phrase to describe a situation in which someone has the freedom to act and speak as they see fit. Naturally, the word reign comes to mind, since royal figures and rulers are able to do as they please. But the correct word, rein, should remind you of when people rode horses for transportation. When a rider would have to navigate steep and rocky paths, he would often loosen his grip on the reins in order for the horse to choose the path, since the horse would want to keep itself out of harm’s way anyway. If you’re referring to giving someone control over a situation, rather than total power over everything, giving them free rein makes much more sense.

2. Incorrect: Tongue and cheek
Correct: Tongue in cheek

This is one expression that’s easy to mislearn, since when it’s spoken aloud, and and in can sound quite similar. To say something in a tongue-in-cheek manner is to speak or write ironically or jokingly. An easy way to remember this expression is to actually try putting your tongue in your cheek. I don’t know about you, but it sort of makes me wink, and of course winking is a way of telling people that you are joking when you say something.

3. Incorrect: Pour over
Correct: Pore over

Many phrases are misused because they utilize little-known and rarely used definitions of common words. The archaic definition of pore as a verb is to “think intently; ponder”—in other words, meditate. When people are poring over documents or books, they are studying them carefully. Of course, “pour over” is a legitimate phrase in itself, but hopefully people aren’t pouring liquids all over their papers.

4. Incorrect: An escape goat
Correct: A scapegoat

In biblical Jewish tradition, the high priest would “place” the sins of the people on a goat on Yom Kippur (the Day of Atonement). By sending this goat into the desert, the people were symbolically sending their sins away from them. This has made its way into modern usage, where the definition of a scapegoat today is someone who is blamed for other people’s mistakes or for things that go wrong, especially when it makes a difficult situation easier for a group to handle.

5. Incorrect: Mute point
Correct: Moot point

The word moot means “debatable, open to debate, doubtable.” It can also describe something that’s of little practical value or relevance. When someone makes a moot point, he is talking about a topic or thought simply to debate it, but ultimately whatever comes out of the conversation won’t have any practical use in the real world. Mute as an adjective means “silent, not speaking,” and is used to describe people rather than points.

6. Incorrect: For all intensive purposes
Correct: For all intents and purposes

When someone says “for all intents and purposes,” they mean “virtually” or “in effect.” This phrase is best understood with an example: “Even though Stacy is technically Adam’s assistant, for all intents and purposes, she makes the major decisions.” Put simply, Stacy is, in effect, the boss, even though her job title suggests otherwise.

The expression comes from old contract law and was meant to ensure that a stipulation would apply to all situations. In this sense, intensive doesn’t make sense because intensity or concentrating on a single topic has nothing to do with the validity of a situation.

7. Incorrect: I could care less
Correct: I couldn’t care less

This is a “favorite” of editors everywhere. If you could care less about a topic, it means that you do care about it somewhat and could take your concern down a few notches. If you couldn’t care less, that means you don’t care about the topic at all—and this is usually what people mean when they use this expression.

If you struggle with idioms and expressions, that’s totally understandable—but we can help!